Wednesday 25 July 2012

MY AWESOME HOLIDAY



by Dante
In the holidays I went to watch Ice Age 4 at the movies.I could see people, delicious popcorn and the huge movie screen. I could hear people from the movie screen talking and shouting. I could smell yummy popcorn. I could feel warm and cold food, delicious lollies and the fluffy chair. I could also taste the yummy food and warm popcorn. It was AN awesome movie. It was awesome because it had lots of adventure in it.
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  1. marcus26 July 2012 at 12:34

    I like Ice Age Four to dante

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  2. Anonymous7 August 2012 at 09:01

    Me too.

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  3. mrs.Delport7 August 2012 at 20:06

    excellent work Dante! I like the way you have used your senses and included descriptive words. Mrs. Delport

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  4. Elise Sefo10 August 2012 at 08:15

    I love your story Dante.

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  5. Ngawini20 September 2012 at 12:24

    Your soo luky

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